Spring Rain/Haiku – Acrostichon – October 8, 2015

 

rainy-day

Spring Rain

seasonal change
passing away in endless
resurrection
ah
it’s October
now the autumn leaves fall
golden and red

Haiku

haijin weave with words
and a moment of surprise
intense sensations
knitted with natural scenes
using seventeen onj

© G.s.k. ‘15

This piece is the result of an interesting puzzle set by Chèvrefeuille at Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie … write an acrostic in haiku form which he calls an Acrostichon … or a Acrostichon which uses a Liaison in the middle of two ku like a bridge to create two different words .. here are some examples:

Sweet memories
Under the old appletree
Newly weds

© Chèvrefeuille

Only eyes for you
Naked she lays on the beach
Everlasting love

© Chèvrefeuille

The Acrostichon and a Liaison. In this one the Acrostichon is AUTUMN and the liaison is TUTU.

A rainy day
Under the umbrella
Tears of joy
U
T
United again by
Music of the Swanlake
Newly weds

© Chèvrefeuille

Perfect way
Of writing haiku
Eastern thoughts
A
S
Tulip bulbs
Redder than red
Year after year

© Chèvrefeuille