Heeding Haiku – Chiyo-Ni Rewrite – December 10, 2015

taoraruru hito ni kaoru ya ume no hana

the flowering branch of the plum
gives its scent
to him who broke it off

© Chiyo-Ni

now broken
this plum branch remains
her memory of spring

© G.s.k. ‘15

Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille December 9th 2015 “(rewrite) Chiyo-Ni”