high in the tree
bright orange persimmon
… ready for Jen
a splash of color
spotting a ripe persimmon
on a grey day
persimmons
falling from the tree
– wind storm
(c) G.s.k. ’14
Writing for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, we had a prompt using “persimmons” (here’s the link to the haiku series) a typical Japanese autumn kigo … Jen has never tasted one, so I thought I’d tell her that, at least here they’re ripening!
we phantoms
of this deadened era
so lost in our brave unnew world
seething in our hyped-up illusions
our hollow distorted dreams
of some yesterday’s ideals
we phantoms
fumble in these nightmarish shrouds
in the twilight …
the kings are in their counting house … Mary lost her lamb
we empty shrouds
we watch as the dark horses
of the apocalypse rise
proudly reigning
upon our cadavers
raining their death and destruction
in our name, for peace, all hail the chief!
and avidly we listen
to the town crier’s newspeak wailing
in a parody of news
the fox hunts the hounds
the kings are in the counting house … Mary lost her lamb
counting up their money
… Mary lost her lamb – all hail the chief
counting up their money
… the homeless filled the land – all hail the chief
counting up their money
… another bomber flew – all hail the chief
in the name of our fathers and their self-serving ideals mythical founding fathers of an avid nation hollowed empty principles of a selfish self-serving age
the sun darkens
the sun ceases to shine
another mighty empire crumbles
in the twilight
a cricket chirps.
The willow bows with the wind,
It sways and it bends,
Then stands tall and true …
Upright and straight once again.
Storms may tower with fury,
Yet, unlike the great oak,
I’ll bend like the willow …
I’ll dance in the rain …
Weathering onslaughts
Of anger and pain
I’ll sway like the willow
My spirit unbroken.
Such is the wisdom
Passed down through the ages
The willow will stand …
For it bends in the wind.
(c) G.s.k. ’14
This poem was inspired by the beautiful verse written by Sara Teasdale: “Like Barely Bending” which Jen from Blog it or Lose it! linked for me today in the form of a beautiful video on YouTube … in Chinese (with subtitles). Thanks Jen.
Noreen Crone-Findlay talks about the crafts she loves with her friend, Tottie Tomato. They'll be sharing tutorials, how to's and step by steps for spool knitting, crochet, doll making, small loom weaving, wood working, paper crafts and all manner of other fun crafts. This is a family friendly blog.
Carpe Diem's Tanka Splendor is part of the Carpe Diem Haiku Family. It's a weekly tanka-meme in which you can write and share tanka inspired on a given prompt every Saturday (mostlty, sometimes it will be on another day).
Noreen Crone-Findlay talks about the crafts she loves with her friend, Tottie Tomato. They'll be sharing tutorials, how to's and step by steps for spool knitting, crochet, doll making, small loom weaving, wood working, paper crafts and all manner of other fun crafts. This is a family friendly blog.
Carpe Diem's Tanka Splendor is part of the Carpe Diem Haiku Family. It's a weekly tanka-meme in which you can write and share tanka inspired on a given prompt every Saturday (mostlty, sometimes it will be on another day).