
people of my age –
with the passing of years
less impurities to cleanse
© Natsume Soseki
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impetuous stream
flows past a weeping willow
– a hidden tear drop
ah – the geese fly south
leaving the ducks and blackbirds
by the lonely stream
[morning’s dark grey sky]
contrasting bright coloured leaves
in a flowing stream
the shell is empty –
lying in the wet green grass
careless stream flows by
ah now, observe life
leaves, birds and dead empty shells
endlessly flowing streams
© G.s.k. ‘16
(* I was happy to learn that haitaishi is the name of linked verse on a set theme – not just linked haiku.)
Today’s episode at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is a “Sparkling Star” , that is the introduction of a famous haiku poet of the past from whom we try to inspire ourselves. The Rules of Sparkling Stars are particular:
Those new haiku, inspired on the ‘masterpiece’, have to follow the classical rules of haiku:
1. 5-7-5 syllables
2. a kigo (or season word)
3. a kireji (or cutting word, in Western languages mostly interpunction)
4. a moment as short as the sound of a pebble thrown into water
5. a deeper meaning (could be Zen-Buddhistic or other spiritual or religious thought)
6. and the first and the third line are interchangeable
These are the haiku written by Natsume Soseki
over the wintry
forest, winds howl in rage
with no leaves to blow
the lamp once out
cool stars enter
the window frame
on New Year’s Day
I long for my parents
before I was born
people of my age –
with the passing of years
less impurities to cleanse
when they strike the bell
these ginkgo leaves are falling –
Temple Kencho-ji
the worldly desires,
all one hundred and eight are gone –
this spring morning
© Natsume Soseki
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