an empty field
where once the willow stood
poppies dance
© Gsk ’16
an empty field
where once the willow stood
poppies dance
© Gsk ’16
Last week I was watching a very interesting video about Chinese ink painting or when applied the Japanese art form Sume-i. The painter was showing how to paint willow branches. At a certain point he related a popular Chinese saying that from a willow cutting an entire forest would grow … which fascinated me.
a willow cutting
planted in an old vase
a future forest
© G.s.k. ‘16
December morning
in splendid golden glory
the willow sways
now alone
she lost her companion
to a summer squall*
with each passing day
she loses her golden chiome
the willow ages **
Today is the last episode dedicated to my haiku and waka on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. I have just written a brief note to Chèvrefeuille thanking him for this opportunity, but above all, thanking him for showing my poetry to myself.
I rarely re-read my poetry or in fact anything I write. I always promise myself that I will wade through my archives and perhaps put together a book or two but never quite find the time to do so. I don’t know what holds me back except perhaps a lack of confidence in my writing.
This special month and my book which Chèvrefeuille published have been such a wonderful experience for me. I wish to thank him and all of you who have read and enjoyed my work for your constant encouragement.
this hidden path
draped in honeysuckle
I hear nature sing
sweet is the blackbird’s song
as spring begins to bloom
© G.s.k. ‘15
Carpe Diem Special #189 Georgia’s 5th strolling yesterday (tanka)
strolling yesterday
astonished by the pine trees.
they seemed to copy
the heavy rain laden skies
imitating it’s wet lay.
© Georgia (May 2013)
a new day rises –
the weeping willow on the piazza
a birds’ gathering
weeping willow
in the autumn sunlight
a golden tree
under the willow
on the city’s graveyard
weeping silhouette
© Chèvrefeuille
the smell of rain
willow washing on the stream
five ducks bathe
© G.s.k. ‘15
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #14 Sense Switching or Synesthesia
fallen – sweet willow
felled by impetuous winds
September tempest
her sisters weep on the shore
and I write her jisei
tall subtle willow
protected young and old
fell – angry winds
© G.s.k. ‘15
This was is what remains of the largest willow in the lake front parks at Riva Del Garda. I rarely could photograph her … she was just way too big – she often was just a few leaves filling in the space around her sister willow.
From last March:
Linked to: Carpe Diem On The Trail With Basho Encore #14 “falling willow leaves”
watery rill
cascading between her breasts
waterfall
seeking her release
in a summer storm
@)–>–>—
frenzied kisses
passionate – no longer tender
drench them in the storm
he sails into her harbour
safe haven in her arms*
@)–>–>–
wayward gull
flies in the summer tempest
the willow beckons
she longs for his touch
his windswept passion
© G.s.k. ‘15
*inspired by BLANCHE SHOEMAKER WAGSTAFF courtesy of The Muscleheaded Blog
wind-swept
dishevelled foliage flying
the weeping willow
the weeping willow
faces the raging wind
storm-tossed
storm-tossed
bending but not breaking
the willow resists
the willow resists
first drops of rain – fall
weeping in the wind
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for:
willow weep your tears
but know your lover returns
with the winds of spring
© G.s.k. ‘15
weep not young willow
spring promises warmth and love
feel the southern breeze
© G.s.k. ‘15
With these two haiga I say adieu to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s Haiga Festival! It’s been fun to watch the willows bloom.
swishing and cooing
wind whispers spring promises
wind in the willow
© G.s.k. ‘15
under the willow
storm winds whisper their promise
silent song birds wait
under the willow
children play and elders nap
summer sun shining
under the willow
a lost lagoon moulders green
water reflections
under the willow
mysterious summer dreams
carps swim in the pond
life happens . . .
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Noreen Crone-Findlay talks about the crafts she loves with her friend, Tottie Tomato. They'll be sharing tutorials, how to's and step by steps for spool knitting, crochet, doll making, small loom weaving, wood working, paper crafts and all manner of other fun crafts. This is a family friendly blog.
Random musings, observations and thoughts from inside a VW camper van.
Poetry. Art. Book Reviews.
a forum for the study of the materialism and ontology of finance
Written Thoughts are unlocked Treasures of the mind...
Welcome to the Feline World of Nera, Tabby and Fluffy
Observations and views from a different set of eyes
Advice on Writing, Publishing, and Book Promotion
An Artist's Eyes Never Rest
Poems
A Blog of Books and Literature
Misk Cooks
wāhine on the go
Poetry ~ Waka
Carpe Diem's Tanka Splendor is part of the Carpe Diem Haiku Family. It's a weekly tanka-meme in which you can write and share tanka inspired on a given prompt every Saturday (mostlty, sometimes it will be on another day).
Haiku inspired (mostly) by my walks in and around Eastbourne
Often rough and filled with switchbacks, the road this child of God is traveling Home.
poetry... mostly...
About fantastical places and other stuff
MALTAWAY TRAVEL per Viaggi, Corsi Inglese e Incentive - maltawaytravel.wordpress.com
a happenstance journal
Who, What, When, Where, How & Why
brenda warren
Mindful parenting and modern pagan lifestyle.