confined in winter
are my heart’s withered blossoms
when once they were fresh
I celebrated life’s loves
time’s passing seasons
in this life never returns
once spring is gone
it’s only a memory
so celebrate now
the flowers of your young heart
be joyous in love
let not cold thoughts freeze you up
dance in the wind
give praise to the warm sun
so when winter comes
you can look back with a smile
remembering cherry blooms
© G.s.k. ‘15
mazu iwae ume o kokoro no fuyu-gomeri
first celebrate
the flowers in your heart
confined in winter
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Written for: Carpe Diem Time Glass #31, Basho’s “first celebrate”
This is so romantic, Georgia, just lovely!
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Thanks … I was trying to inspire myself with that “first celebrate” …
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Beautiful — bittersweet — hopeful. Very nicely done!
[sigh…!]
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Ah thanks Paloma … when you start getting into the winter of life, you’ve just got your memories sigh ….
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“let not cold thoughts freeze you up”
I think that’s advice that I need to take to heart!
Confined in Winter
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And yet, you seem so warm to me ….
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the ending is superb!
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Thanks so much!
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Achingly beautiful!!
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🙂
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Awesome choka Georgia. I can’t imagine that I missed this one. I was doing so research for our new Tokubetsudesu episode of tomorrow.
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Thanks Chèvrefeuille … I really enjoyed doing this particular choka, and I’m very glad you liked it. 🙂
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Ah … I just read today’s post and am very happy you found a choka you liked for today’s episode … a real privilege. 🙂
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