Stoplight
along a lonely road
driving under the rain
water and traffic flowed
and then, memories of a train
of another age and day
seeped into my brain
everything then seemed so grey
I remember a flashing red light
and a locked up sidewalk cafe
I took the last train that night
running away from my troubled life
after yet another fight
after years of useless strife
it no longer really mattered
to be his loving patient wife
in grey the streets were splattered
my morale was rent and tattered
and a distant stoplight glowed
in the rain, at the end of the road
© G.s.k. ‘15
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Wow, this is very good, and very ambitious for so early in the morning! A Terzanelle!
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Thanks Misky, that’s encouraging … I’m not overly fond of the Terzanelle to tell the truth – so it doesn’t matter when I write them 😉
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🙂
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Memories. Some so long ago they could be someone else’s. Your poem has created the mood of desperation and need of flight.
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Thanks … it was certainly that … thanks for sharing your impression with me!
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Oh wow! What a power-packed write! Bravo!!!!
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Thanks Gracie .. 🙂
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wonderful…you make me want to try this form!
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Now THAT is a compliment .. thanks!
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I love this. I read it three times.
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Wow … what a compliment! Thanks.
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This is so well done, mournful.
“I took the last train that night” — last chances, second chances. Love this.
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Thanks .. an interesting interpretation .. I like it a lot!
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Wow.
I love terzanelles. They make a poem flow so well.
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I love to read them … glad you enjoyed the poem … thanks for sharing it with me!
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Gorgeous terzanelle.. I think I have written one sometime ago. Its a challenging form indeed. But your poem flows easily and is ardently touching
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Thanks … it is a bit challenging … thanks for reading it and your great comment.
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WOW, the last 4 lines especially grabbed me.
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Thanks … I’m glad they did, that’s why they’re four lines instead of three – I think. 🙂
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I’m constantly amazed to be part of a group of poets who are amazing, stellar writers–we all seem to feed off the contagious creative energy and inspiration; and the acceptance–whether we’re writing top-drawer or not, on a given day.
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Yes … it is a fantastic event … perhaps we should try to create a year-round club of writers!
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That would be fun…but I s’pose I’d have to commit to staying with one blog for a year, eh? 🙂
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Nah … just keep coming back in your new dress so we can admire you 😉
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You’re the BEST–giggling over “new dresses”…and shoes, don’t forget shoes!
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Oh yes … can’t forget the shoes!
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Ruby slippers, preferably–open-toe, sling-heel…
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Ah … yes, sounds like a perfect shoe for you 😉 very chic!
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Laughing…these days, I’d probably fall out of them (neuropathy in my feet)!
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Can’t fall out of virtual shoes my dear neuropathy or not.
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Oh you’re so right–yaaayyy!
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😀
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🙂
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I could feel you at each stanza, cara, beautifully written…a form I have seen you do so well and I have yet to find that talent and patience…but oh, it is a powerful read, my dear. Brava!
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oh wow .. what a compliment! Thanks Oli, really!
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“my morale was rent and tattered” Oh this line! What a painfully lovely piece!
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Thanks Grace .. it was a difficult moment for sure.
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❤️
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@)–>—
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a train ride, differs from a bike ride, or a walk,
nice twists of memories.
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That’s true.
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