ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
dance of the spirits
© Celestine of Reading Pleasure
delighting innocent souls
weaving northern light ballet
© G.s.k.
Tan Renga – Carpe Diem Haiku Kai # 37
Please click the link above for the full prompt and to see how renga works 😉 … Bastet
What an amazong pic chased up by colourful words
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Ah…the Northern lights are so beautiful, but in person 🙂
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yesss hehe
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Oh Ilove this, Georgia. I have yet to see the Northern Lights! many First Nations People call from up North and they share their stories…so beautiful, Aurore Boreal…si merveilleux!
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I saw then when I lived in Alaska…they are so beautiful, I’ve never seen anything as spectacular as this illustratin though.
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There are some areas in Qurbec we can see them… and up north In Ontario…actuallg all north in Canada…I must go ln a trip.
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That would be something to go on a trip to see. I suppose we could go up to Sweden, Finland or Norway to see them. Interesting idea…but don’t think it’sll get any further than that!
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It’s just a 6 to 8 hour drive North actually…so I should check it out…there is also a rail excursion going North…
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Cool…like the idea of a rail excursion…I think it would take me more than 8 hours to make it to the North and of course this is the wrong time of the year for Northern Lights…but it could be an interesting trip for the winter!
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Many Aboriginal youths who call from up North, say they see it almost all year.
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Cool! I guess I was remembering Anchorage…this is the time of year when it’s always sun shiny. Which I actually loved very much being an early riser, but with the sun there weren’t any northern lights that I remember.
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I’ve been thinking of using my “private blog” to do some revisioning of older poems. Would you care to be a reader?
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Oh my I would be honoured!! I have been thinking sorting my poems too, maybe on my 2nd vacation in August.
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I’ve got so much stuff to read through and re-write that it’s not even funny anymore. I’ll send you an e-mail soon…and thanks! I’ll be looking forward to your 2nd vacation in August!
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I would love your feedback when I clean up and edit as well.
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Thanks…to me feed back is essential…I’m just no good at reading my own stuff!
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I dont think we are…that makes total sense…when I used to do transcriptions of court cases, I had to have someone else read and edit my transcripts…we just pass over our own mistakes over …and for poetry or any writing, it helps to have someone to ask questions to ensure they know what you mean…you write beautifully, Georgia. Time to publish an anthology from Italia (cool!!!) How is your son doing?
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Thanks for this encouragment and understanding. It would be nice to get something out there…believe it or not, I’m really a chicken when it comes to the idea of publishing…but I want to get over this phobia and move on! My son’s cheek has finally deflated and he’s almost back to normal…poor dear has to go through all this again in June, but for the moment, he’s planing a trip to France to visit a friend…thanks for asking! 🙂
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My thoughts are with him…I still remember it so well.
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I’m ashamed to say that I’m happy that this was one experience that passed me by.
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I was too wise..the removed all 4 wisdom teeth…haha
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lol! After seeing what he went through I think that’s a bit rash!
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but Im wise beyond my years!!! haha
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lol!!!
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Marvellous second stanza with a gorgeous photo to make it even a stronger image … nice continuation Georgia.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked them.
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A real nice completion, Georgia 🙂
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Thank you very much Celestine, I’m happy you like them. 🙂
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