There is no warning rattle at the door
Emotions grow from seeds adrift
Inside the wind or on a cloud
Unannounced love is born.
There is no warning rattle at the door
One day a child becomes a woman
The years like a river flows
Unannounced childhood retreats.
There is no warning rattle at the door
Babies suddenly are full-grown
They leave the nest and form their own
Unannounced life moves on.
There is no warning rattle at the door
Grey hairs grow more than black
Little pains deny sleep at night
Unannounced old age comes.
There is no warning rattle at the door
The bell tolls in the city plaza
A poet died – people mourn
Unannounced the reaper comes.
Written for Speakeasy # 164
In memory of Maya Angelou, a poet.
This IS so heartfelt and beautiful, Georgia. A poet, a wise guru to many and a mentor to so many.
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Thanks Oli, for your beautiful comment.
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Wise words and beautifully crafted. Well done!
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Thanks Wizardsword!
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I liked this very much – the repetition gives it a villanelle-like feel. Very moving.
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Thanks…if I’ spent a little more time I probably could have pulled out a better poem as you say in the villanelle form, which is one of my favorites…maybe it needs some polishing.
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Perhaps down the road a villanelle would be something to consider 😉 BUT … I like it just the way it is. 🙂 Ya done good!
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Thanks Jen, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂 maybe later with a little silver polish. 😉
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Just a tad perhaps ….!
I did some more polishing myself — the Vincent series is okay so I’m working on the Haiku of the Nations now.
Send the industrial-sized bottles …. lots of work! o.O
This poem however — wonderful. 😀
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Thanks again…you did make me laugh and that’s wonderful in the early morning … so I’ll be sending along the industrial-sized bottles of silver polish! 🙂
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I’ll be waiting — with my wheelbarrow! 😉
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This was a truly beautiful tribute to a beautiful poet. Well done!
God bless you,
Cheryl
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Thanks Cheryl. God Bless you too. Georgia.
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“Emotions grow from seeds adrift.” That’s a beautiful line. I also liked the repetition of “there is no warning rattle at the door.”
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Thanks..the repetition seemed most fitting … I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
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The repetition — both “there is no warning…” and “unannounced…” — reflects the rhythm of life. I think Maya would approve. 😉
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I’d like to think she’d have liked it. Thanks for reading and commenting Meg.
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Finely crafted tribute. I, too, liked the repetition.
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Thanks very much Splendid Empress!
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Very powerful! I really enjoyed this.
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Thanks very much, I’m happy you did and said so!
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Absolutely beautiful and heart-tugging.
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Thanks April for reading and commenting!
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Beautiful, moving poetry …tribute to a beautiful poet.
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Thanks Joanne.
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This brought a lump to my throat. Beautifully done.
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I’m happy that it conveyed the feeling behind it. Thanks for reading and commenting Zeudytigre.
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Beautiful tribute and fitting. A captivating poem for a remarkable poet. Well done!
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Thanks very much Kathy for reading and commenting.
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Beautifully crafted, Bastet! I particularly love the way you use repetition. 🙂
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Thanks Suzanne..the line and indeed how the post was written, brought this to mind and I’m pleased that it had such a positive response.
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