The Visit
In a kitchen bright with chromium shelves,
A plethora of pans and a conveyor belt,
The blast of the oven freed a vortex of smells –
Of apples, onions and cinnamon too.
The receptionist stood at the kitchen door
Tapping his foot in disgust and dismay
He sought out someone to clean up the hall
(A mad tourist had smeared vaseline everywhere).
In the bedlam of the kitchen he went ignored,
Everyone was busy doing this or that …
He let out such a wail of ire and bile
He surprised a young mermaid, swimming nearby.
The chef in his cap glowered balefully
At the man who’d made his orange souffle fall
Pivotal for the evening meal it’d been …
Now he’d have to start over again.
The vaseline gone, the souffle risen high,
The hotel was ready for their special guest …
Everyone wore their uniforms with pride …
As the Michelin gourmet sat awarding his stars.
Yes, the Michelin map now has a new five-star hotel
Near a hillside that overlooks the Zuiderzee,
The gourmet raves at the wonders of their orange souffle
And the bright clean sheen of the reception hall.
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Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie wordle contains 12 words those words are: 1. Pivotal 2. Mermaid 3. Bedlam 4. Blast 5. Conveyor 6. Chromium 7. Plethora 8. Cinnamon 9. Vortex 10. Kitchen 11. Reception 12. Vaseline
haha I could visualize this so clearly! A fun read XD
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Thanks .. couldn’t get it to gel for some reason … had to start over a couple of times until this one finally was born.
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A menagerie wordle indeed! That was amazing that you created a story poem from all of those words, what a challenge! Very entertaining, thanks for linking up with OctPoWriMo 2014!
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Glad you liked it … and thanks for being her to link to! 🙂
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I have to say, this sounds like an everyday occurrence at the Netherworld Hotel!
I always enjoy the whimsical side of things. 🙂
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/octpowrimo-2014-day-1.html
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Glad you enjoyed! And cool to see you’re doing OctPoWriMo!
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This is sooo cute – and up-to-date! I’ve touched that mermaid in Copenhagen.
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Hi Viv! Thanks I’m happy you enjoyed it!
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Enjoyed reading this. 🙂
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Thanks Payal … it was fun to write 🙂
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Oh well done! I’d have thought that the humble “Vaseline” would be the hardest to work in and you made it the star!
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Tell you the truth .. I didn’t know how to work it in and restarted writing this piece 3 times.
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What a fun read! And thank you for sharing the Wordle prompt (which I’m now following). Looking forward to reading more of your poems this month!
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Cool … I love wordles and Yves puts up a great one. I hope to drop by and read your work today … happy writing!
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This is was so much fun! Very well done.
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Thanks … wordles are so much fun to do, I love them.
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Incredible fun. I am so impressed with the talent it takes to put such a cohesive story together in this sort of format! Well done!
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Thanks very much Zoebyrd for commenting and your encouragement. I love to find the poem in the wordles .. it’s really a lot of fun!
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Excellent use of the words Georgia. Very entertaining. Well done.
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Thanks Michael … took awhile to do this week … the vaseline kept mucking up the works 🙂
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This was definitely a visual read. I enjoyed it very much.
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Thanks Tamara … happy you enjoyed it!
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This was so much fun — !
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Thanks … it was one of the hardest wordles I’ve ever written.
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With those words — I can believe it! But you always make them look effortless 🙂
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Ah, sometimes they are … but when you’ve got vaseline in the works … 🙄 (hope this smiley works)
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LOL!
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