Brooding under the tenuous moon, the wicked witch sat reflecting about her current lover, who of course didn’t really appreciate her genius, the wimp. She’d dump him.
Though beautiful, her heart was a black hole. Everything and everyone that came too near, got sucked up, transformed and spit out as an appendence of herself. She avoided mirrors. Like Dorian Grey’s portrait they showed her the dissipation caused by her wickedness. Strangely, she was woman enough to wonder why no one really loved her.
A cat spied her sitting on a park bench. It saw her aura, so prudently slipped away.
© G.s.k. ‘15
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers and I’m submitting it to Tale Weaver as well, as it speaks of a “wicked witch” of sorts.
Love the nod to Dorian Grey. Very interesting character you’ve drawn!
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Thanks it was a fun write … I’ve written very little else but poetry lately …
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G:) Grazie, Ciao!
Why are most witches ‘wicked?’ Need to see a wicket witch on the pitch at a cricket match – or a licked witch! Thank you for your words G:)
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I think a wicket witch would be interesting – but she’s not really mean, it just that that’s how they wrote her part 😉
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Long time since have heard a witch story.. Nice one… Cheers.. Rajesh
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Thanks … it’s been a long time since I’ve written one! Glad you enjoyed it Rajesh! Georgia.
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Great story! I loved the last line.
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Meow …. glad you enjoyed it!
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Great. Story. Cara!! I may give the prompt a try
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Thanks, I hadn’t written for a while … and loved the photo 🙂
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Me too it has been a while…Have you read her book!! Please say Kaddish for me? it IS sooooo good!! an epic really…just amazing!!
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I’ve not read it yet … I have to find it in a format for my reader … I don’t kindle 😦
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Ah yes, I remember now. I have Kindle and got another Kobo and often I read on my phone at night (have Kobo, Kindle and Google) so I fall asleep with the phone in my hand…haha and have to reread the last 8 or 10 pages the next day. Can you not get it to go on your laptop?
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Dear Georgia,
I could feel the witch in all of us. 😉 Well drawn portrait.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle … exactly … very sharp .. 🙂 Ciao, Georgia.
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I like it, interesting take on the prompt. Looks like she is a bit too full of herself. I really like the black hole inside sucking everything and everyone in.
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Yep … that’s why the lady is a witch 😉 Glad you enjoyed the post!
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Interesting. I always love story about witch, haha!
Oh Dorian gray .. Ben Barnes is so cute. 😀
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🙂 glad you liked the story and the nod at Dorian Gray …
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are witches as bad as human beings are? i am not too sure, interesting
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Oh my, but witches are human beings … and there are good ones and bad ones … this one is just an excuse to write about a man I know btw 😉
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Really excellent job Georgia! Love the imagery conjured as well as the various references to things like Dorian Grey, the cat – a traditional witch’s familiar – etc. And so brilliantly written with a clarity and precision wonderful – an inspired 100 flash! 😀
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Thanks MJ … I’m really glad you enjoyed the write and thanks for the lovely comment!
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Thanks so much Georgia for linking in with the Tale weaver, enjoyed your tale…
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I love the prompts … but summer is snowing me under … I’ll be glad when fall returns 😉
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