and as the sun sets – boldly
conquering this wide valley
in shades of red and purple
the moment seems so holy
oh light and dark
woven together
in unity –
the here and now
universal
eternity
of light and dark
as sun sets
the beauty of life
expands me
beyond death
now – the star-lit sky opens
unto transcendence
© G.s.k. ‘15
I’m writing this post inspired by Paloma’s B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond – The Twenty-Eight who was inspired by the poet, J Lapis who can be found at DarkLight Harbor and a wonderful blogger and friend Chris creator and coordinator of The Muscleheaded Blog where he introduced Maxfield Parrish, illustrator and painter, this week – the painting above is his.
[The Twenty Eight – Poetry Form
Four lines with seven syllables each;
end-rhyme the first and fourth line (optional).
Alternate Form
Seven lines with four syllables each.]
Swift Fiery Season
Copper’d flames fast-burnt, fallen;
Leaf carpet, ember’d pathway
‘Neath November’s pewter rain…
Swift fiery season ashen.
© J Lapis, 2015
Oh my, you set such a lovely and reverent mood with this, Bastet–Brava!
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Thanks J … I’m glad you enjoyed the poem … it is really an inspirational form – and I like how I can use the four – seven syllable form with the seven- four syllable for – way cool!
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Way cool, indeed 🙂
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🙂 Thank you so much, Georgia !!!!!!! I love this post! 🙂
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Thank you Chris … glad you enjoyed it! I’d never heard of Maxfield Parrish – a revelation and I really liked the last landscape I saw on your post btw really beautiful choice … 🙂
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That form is interesting. I hadn’t heard of it before, but now I want to try it! Love the words you used in your poem, very descriptive 🙂
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Thanks Ghostmmnc … II’m glad you found the form interesting .. and hope you do try it out … Glad you enjoyed my poem too 🙂
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It is a sacred and holy time! 🙂
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🙂 …
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A very spiritually centred shadorma. If I don’t get my weekly fix of reading and writing shadorma I don’t feel right.:)
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Ah .. now that is a great habit to form 😉 looking forward to your weekly “fix” 🙂
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Gorgeous poem, Bastet — You’ve really captured the spirit of the painting — wow!
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Thanks so much … an inspirational painting indeed!
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Both morning and evening are special times.
You’ve captured that with your verse.
I played here:
Brilliant Art
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these a true beauties!
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🙂 thanks Candy …
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