misty fields
in uncertain light
a bare tree stands
[through the fog]
sparrows and persimmons
meet in the first light
mixed with snowflakes
so pale and enchanting
silver light
in the icy mist
the voyager departed
into first light
the trains crossed clacking loudly
leaving deafening silence
© G.s.k. ‘16
Here are a few of the examples which Jane gives for first light:
first light
nudging frozen clouds
snow flakes
milky dawn
the world without color
takes form
spots of blue
varying the light to fit
tracks in the snow
© Jane Reichhold
and by Chèvrefeuille:
winter morning
the fragile light of the sun
reflects in the snow
a cold moonlit night
just the sound of fresh fallen snow –
wandering over the moors
© Chèvrefeuille
The train sounds add so much to the experience!
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Near my son’s place in Padua the trains pass through going to the station not far from where he lives … and give one a feel of impermanence. Glad you enjoyed the post Carol!
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I especially love the sparrows and persimmons
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🙂 definitely wintry – at least in my parts of the world 😉 glad you enjoyed them.
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Breathtaking-ly beautiful !! Loved it !
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Thank-you very much and your avatar is very beautiful too. Thanks for dropping by Kokilagupta.
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