American Haiku
I
Moon Shine
moon shine over mountains
inebriates my sleeping mind
she reflects on the roof top
II
Mountain moonshine
inebriates my mind
before dawn.
n.b. I’m trying to find Jack Kerouac’s form of haiku…the American Haiku:
“Then I’ll invent the American Haiku type: The simple rhyming triolet:– Seventeen syllables? No, as I say, American Pops:– Simple 3-line poems”
– Jack Kerouac, Reading Notes 1965
“The windmills of
Oklahoma look
In every direction.”
“One flower
on the cliffside
Nodding at the canyon.”
II
“In the medicine cabinet
the winter fly
Has died of old age.”
Someone said that the American Sentence is the same thing…but no. Allen Ginsberg invented the American Sentence :
From: “This form, invented by Allen Ginsberg, is simply a variation of the haiku. The rules of an American Sentence are very simple. The poem is one sentence, 17 syllables long. That’s it. If you can write a haiku, you can write an American Sentence, though it would also be fair to argue it’s a little more challenging because while haiku don’t have to be complete sentences, American Sentences … well, kind of obviously do.” The American Sentence – Writing on the Sun
Seems the Ginsberg didn’t like to write haiku so: “Ginsberg’s solutions, which first appear in his book Cosmopolitan Greetings, are his American Sentences: One sentence, 17 syllables, end of story. It makes for a rush of a poem, and if you decide to include the season and an aha! moment as Japanese haiku do—i.e., a divided poem with a hinge or pause separating the originator from the kapow!—well, more power to you!” About.com – Allen Ginsberg’s American Sentences – An Introduction to His Variation on Haiku.
And just to confus me a little more, whilst doing OctPoWriMo 2013 I did this prompt: OctPoWriMo – Poetry Prompt Day 21: Short, Sweet and Simple:
Quotes for inspiration:
― Jack Kerouac
― Jack Kerouac
– Jack Kerouac
Anyone know something about this subject?
Gorgeous picture.
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thanks.
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All of it is beautiful
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Thanks…now it grew a bit
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I love it! Of course, you went the same direction (with the moonshine) that I was headed…but I think I’ll take your Allen Ginsberg thinking and write a simple sentence. Thanks. I’m stoked.
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Glad you enjoyed it…seems that there’s a bit of confusion as to which is which…I’m going to be studying these three until I can get them straight…wish there were someone on had that has some backgound knowledge 🙂
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well, I plucked out my seventeen syllabled sentence on dew, happy for the continuity.
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Cool!
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Love both your takes on moonshine Georgia 🙂
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Thanks, the sentence though wasn’t 17 syllables. sigh…
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