FRIDAY FICTIONEERS:
“As always, writers are encouraged to be as innovative as possible with the prompt and 100 word constraints.”
(Form: Haibun
100 Words)
The Memory Shelf
I went on a lovely sentimental journey the other day while visiting my Mom. I walked into her room and saw her what-not shelf full of old bric-a-brac. On one shelf were my silver charms from a bracelet I’d thought long lost and the shells I’d picked up from the time we went to Hawaii.
So many memories. A tiny Tupperware charm from who knows which party, Grandma with my uncle when they were little and some things I’d never even seen before. I took a photograph, a memory of memories.
what-not memories
carefully placed on display
love not forgotten
You have absolutely no problem with the 100-word challenge, which isn’t surprising in my opinion as you are able to be so succinct with your haikus while capturing ideas so thoroughly.
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Wow! I like these concentrated stories in fact much more that the prompts where people want me to write at least a thousand words…
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That’s an amazing haibun. I love the feelings and memories in it.
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Thanks…I had to do a little work to get it all in the 100 words believe me! 😉
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I can imagine! Have you had a go at the Ligo Haibun?
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Well, the first one you looked at was for Ligo Haibun 😉
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🙂
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😉
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I really, really like good haibun A lot. They are such a pleasure to read!
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I’m fascinated with haibun since I discovered it at Ligo Haibun…they are a pleasure to write and hope to write some really good ones some day!
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That WAS a good one. Sincerely beautiful.
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🙂 thanks very much, I appreciate your encouragement!
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