Hokku:
Ah! those cherry blossoms
their beauty amazes me again –
finally spring is here
© Chèvrefeuille
raining pink perfumed petals
decorates the warm tarmac
swallows from Africa
celebrate with cherry blossoms
making new nests
farmer’s barn decorated
with wicker basket homes
eggs laid
maturing in the warm spring
last cherry bloom falls
peeping young swallows cry
no cherry blossoms greet them
tiny green cherries
dangling tree decorations
young swallows first flights
swirling in the warm orchard
bees, swallows and butterflies
last swallow departs
the cherry tree stands bare
golden leaves fall
thoughts of swallows as it snows
dreaming of cherry blossoms
first cherry blossoms
greet the returning swallows
rebirth of life
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for: Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #53, Soliloquy no Renga “Ah! Those Cherry Blossoms”
Today’s episode of Tokubetsudesu is to write a soliloquy no renga … that is a renga where just one poet creates a series of haiku for the hokku presented … concluding it by connecting in a full circle to the hokku. Here is how Chèvrefeuille explains it:
The first verse “hokku” gives the title to the renga and sets the entire image of your renga. By association on the verse before the verse you have to write you can make the renga a complete story. The Soliloquy no Renga is just for fun and I hope it will bring you the fun and inspiration as I had in mind. You can choose on your own how much links you use, but at least (as I said above) six (6) links. The last link has to make the “circle complete” and in that way has a link with the first verse. That last verse is called “ageku”.
Love the visuals.
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🙂 Thanks Chris!
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This is lovely, Georgia! I wasn’t sure where to go with this just yet. Full circle – nicely done 🙂
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🙂 well … I just followed the yellow brick road … and as Chèvrefeuille said to close off at the beginning …
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Beautifully done Georgia!
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Lovely indeed. A children’s picture book with depth for the adult that reads to them.
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Thanks Joanna …
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You mastered it, Georgia. Superb work. 🙂
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Thanks Celestine … you make me smile!
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Wow what a visual feast in words. “warm tarmac” happens to be my favorite adjective and noun combo here but there is so much to see. I love how the poetry progresses through the seasons too. I saw what you did there. 😉 well done, my friend. Just lovely.
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Oh … coming from you this is wonderful comment to read, you have so mastered this art and I’ve rarely seen anything written by you that isn’t top notch .. thanks very much! And my compliments on you haiku collection … sublime.
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Amazing poetry, Very well done.
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Thanks so much Menon!
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bravo! again you’ve done amazing work.
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Thanks Candy!
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I love your soliloquy no renga Georgia. Very well done …
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Thanks Chèvrefeuille! A great hokku!
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Thank you … the hokku makes the renga they say, maybe they are right
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Definitely.
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Oh gosh this is awesome the whole circle of life for the tree and swallow, what a beautiful story
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Thanks Mandy … 🙂
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Beautiful imagery..love it!:)
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Thanks so much Payal!
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this is amazing, Georgia 🙂 love it!
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Thanks!
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You never cease to amaze me, cara! I love your generous way of adding that last explanation helping the reader who may not know this and one has to go back and reread it to see the connections. Full circle indeed!! so beautifully written; I was thinking of my good friends living in the country who would appreciate your connection with nature in this piece…but would have to translate it…I may ask a colleague who is a writer as well, to help me and send to you too. Gros câlin, ma chère…bisous x
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Oh what a lovely compliment cara and what an idea! Thanks so much and hugs to you my dear!
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You are so welcome. I wrote this piece at work today and low and behold, I forgot it at the office…grrrr. will try ot resurrect something before the prompt closes.
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Oh bad luck that … but now you’ve something in the archives …
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Very well done:)
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Thanks 🙂
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