wind off the tundra
swirling dervishes in white
under the midnight sun
lost in desert thoughts
arid wastelands in the world
and empty people
no map can find the desert
hidden in a person’s soul
© G.s.k. ‘15
Reading the haiku written today on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, I came across Haiku Plate Special‘s offering, which inspired the above haiku … of course she’s absolutely right – there are many kinds of deserts … and the Alaskan Tundra is one of them and so’s an arid human soul:
town with no bookstores
she wanders the downtown
thirsty
— There are many kinds of deserts.
So very true!!! brava, cara! I almost wrote about desert snow when I think of vast fields of snow drifts we get…I love your series very much, especially your tanka!!
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Thanks … but this one I thank Haiku Plate Special … it never would have come to mind without her haiku.
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I enjoyed that one as well…what would life be without books??????
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An arid desert!
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Oh yes — many different types of deserts. I really enjoyed your response Bastet —- beautifully done. Now off to visit Haiku Plate Special — 😀
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Thanks … enjoy!
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Your turn of phrase here was wonderful. 🙂
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Thanks Chris …
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Wow, those last 2 lines about the desert hidden in a person’s soul really grabbed me.
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Thanks Dell … I got all wound up in the desert yesterday …
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Gorgeous poem.
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I like your poem and thanks for sharing my haiku 🙂
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I thank you Cathy … your haiku, apart from being really right on, also reminded me of the many types of deserts that exist ….
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I am glad to hear it. I try to think outside the box!
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One of the reasons I like to read your haiku.
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Amazing treat! (y)
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Thanks so much Ruchi Chopra!
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Welcome! Take Care 🙂
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Those dervishes swirling helping to find their inner self … in their desert they are the kings
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Very true …
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