(Haiku)
my fingers
delight running through his hair
brushing his brow
(Dodoitsu form: 7-7-7-5)
This brush with winter’s snowflakes
Brought to mind summer’s heat wave
Not that I’m never happy
I just prefer fall
(Tanka)
his fingers brushed
across her breast, tenderly
raising feelings
that had seemed forever gone
just sweet memories of youth
(Troiku)
the bells ring
the sun tops the mountains
another morning dawns
the bells ring
the pigeons always surprised
fly away in fright
the sun tops the mountains
darkness flees the light
hiding in the forest
another morning dawns
the sun’s brush
paints the valley gold
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for Haiku Horizons – Brush
and linked to B&P Shadorma and Beyond, Carpe Diem Haiku Kai (Dodoitsu)
Very nicely written on nature and love.Delightful!
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Thanks so much Menons.
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Yes, I think this is a lovely piece, G
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Thanks …
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Your are amazing with your Haiku – this is just lovely.
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Thanks Viveka dear … lovely to see you!
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Beautifully done — the dodoitsu made me smile – !!
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Me too. Loved it. If I ever get another cat I’m calling it dodoitsu…..great sounding name 🙂
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That would be a great cat name!
If I get another dog it’ll be either Trochee or Dactyl. (They are poetic feet.) 😉
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I like the idea! Here Dodoitsu ….
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very fine!
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wonderful cascade!:)
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Thanks you Apurva!
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Beautiful and romantic.
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