Monday Poetry Prompt #27 was about fear! I’m writing it anyway and posting it on the results page!
Fear
The hands go ’round the clock
Clock, that ticks away my hours
Hours spent in useless conflict
Conflict of what’s best for me
Me, that is myself not you
You who would be my father
Father was not my perfect model
Model of how to live my life
Life passes by and soon it’s gone
Gone to never be replaced
Replaced by aught but a memory
Memory of who I was
Was this then my greatest fear
Fear of being forgotten
Forgotten in the streams of time
Time that passes on the clocks
Clocks measure my passing hours
Hours that are gone forever
Forever is just so very long
Long…as in eternal.
Thanks Shainbird my friend, you’re an ace!
Wow Georgia, the flow on this is impeccable! The movement is seamless and overall the message is powerful.
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Thanks Shain…the subject of fear seems to bring things out for me. At the moment I’m having a few problems here at home…so it’s been hard to write at all.
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My best wishes to you Georgia. Writing can either slow down during tough times or run wild, I hope things get better soon. Ciao bella!
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Thanks for your encouraging words…I’m finding ways to get around the problems, so though I may be slowed down, I won’t be stoppe 😉 ciao! A presto!
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Love the poem and really enjoyed this form….ya see!! I need yoh n Cubby to teach me new things…how I miss my laptop!
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Hope you can solve the problem quickly! Terrible when one is without their computer!
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I bought a tablet…just did not pick it up yet..with my migraines I didnt have the patience to learn something new. And the store vlosed early yesterday due to winds 90 to 100km and no hydro.
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Heard about those winds…ore at least maybe they’re the same winds…someone had to leave home and go to a hotel…scary!
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I went to visit my ex…I did not venture driving in the country to see my mom.
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Well I hope things have calmed down by now.
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All’s good… got an adorable smile from my mom. 😀
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Great…wish I could go and visit my mom…but I have to cross an ocean and a part of two continents…happy for you 🙂
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